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Post by librarylover on Jul 19, 2009 21:45:31 GMT
Okay, I am writing stories for a series, but they keep coming to me out of order. This is the latest one that I have written, and I'd appreciate any feedback you have on how to make it better. I am worried that it may be too happy, or slightly OOC. librarylover82.livejournal.com/2559.html
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